Chubgp's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Bad Day For Ghost Antics]

what if it was a FREAK day for FREAKY ghost antics

FunnyUserGuy responds:

Oh no sir, I would not like any FREAKozoids in my pantalones. No sir!!

[in black and white]

ONION GIRL!!!

[Zodiac Spirit: Timeless Cycle | Prologue]

Cool concept and the plot is intriguing.

Some of the text box is kinda hard to follow (example: on the 4th/5th? page when the lightning hit the tree I read downward instead of the left box because of the dark tone of the leaves making me think the 2 panels are connected this is very much a nitpick so don't worry!!).

Character designs are very cute but had I not read the description I would've thought Ryujimi was the Ox (mostly because of the horns and her big fluffy ears being obscured by her bangs in the comic).

These criticisms are not that big of a deal and I enjoyed the comic which is the important thing. No doubt you will only improve your comic making skills as long as you keep developing this world and this story or create new ones I don't know...

Maybe I'm being too hard on this prologue sorry I am very tired while writing this review. I'm talking out my ass sorry this is coming from a dude who reads like 10 mangas...

OnyxGalaria responds:

No need to apologize, I am very much open to constructive critisism! It helps me learn and grow as an artist!

I do agree that with how I laid out the comic, it's a bit hard to read; probably because I made a right-to-left comic in English which is a cardinal sin in the comic world. If I do go through with making this series, I'll 100% make it left-to-right.

For the character designs, they aren't final for the most part as I'll go through and tweak any designs I'm not too happy with; for example, the Horse and Ox. By the way, Ryujimi is a guy! :3

[Vacant War Ch1 Pg11-15]

Really solid 1st chapter. The artwork is very impressive and you did a good job on establishing Renatum's character. Good job!!

logdogdraws responds:

I’m very glad to hear that thank you!

[Secret Santa 2023 II]

gosh darn i love it so much aaa
Words cannot describe my gratitude.
Thank you. I hope your plants are watered and you find a nickel under your bed every night for 2 weeks. Hugs and kisses.

Pandasmal responds:

youre welcome! and thanks lol

[NG Secret Santa '23]

le epico

[IM CRANKIN' FUCKING 90S, CHAT-]

this piece is insane

OnyxGalaria responds:

tysm!
had a blast with this colorful design!

[LIL RED [3/3]]

art and layout is good. Very enjoyable to read.

Nildenada responds:

Hi Chubgp, thanks for the praise! I tried to make the most out of the format by using a lot of vertical locations and action

[Very Powerful Muscle Guy]

the body render is good dude its really cool to see you improve so much in real time

FunnyUserGuy responds:

Thanks bud for looking at my works of autism, I guess I've started improving again somewhat.

[Super Nosed Vegeta]

HOLYY SHIIIT

FunnyUserGuy responds:

Pretty impressive nose right? It doesn't come with a warranty though.